Warriors: Leafpool's Wish

Good job Sunsetsplash, you gave it your all.

Aquamarine the Seawing
Wave’heart of Riverclan
Princess Moonfall of badlands
Sophia Brooks of HufflePuff
Jade’claw of Birdclan

CHAPTER 6

Willowpaw instantly shot up and ran out of the den. The sun was setting, and she looked down at her chest, not a scratch. She sniffed, no blood smell. It had been a dream. She was about to go back into her den, until she heard a rrerr. She looked behind her and saw two cats, one was lying down, and one was sitting up. It was a gray she and- MistyLeaf. She slowly crouched closer to the hill they were on, and sniffed. No blood scent, and both cats were thunderclan cats. She was curious about what they were saying, so she went closer.

“MistyLeaf,” said the she. “How do you feel about..” The she trailed off. “How do you feel about what?” MistyLeaf asked. “How do you feel about Willowpaw?” “Willowpaw?” MistyLeaf said. “Yes, she’s a KittyPet.” Remarked the cat. “I don’t see what you're saying.. Spottedear.” “I’m saying she’s, well.. b..ad I’m saying she’s bad.” Spottedear said. “Willowpaw? Why Willowpaw?” Thought MistyLeaf. “I… I like her.. why do you think she’s bad?” MistyLeaf meowed. “Well.. she’s weak. A weak kittypet. We need to convince the leader to kick her out of the clan.” Said Spottedear. Willowpaw couldn’t help but let out a hisss! Both of the cats looked back. Suddenly, Willowpaw ran off. “Willowpaw?!” MistyLeaf said, but she was already gone.

Suddenly, Willowpaw stopped in front of her den. She smelled an unknown smell coming from the nursery. She sniffed again, it was the smell of Treeclan. WillowPaw slowly went to the nursery, and then saw a tan and brown Tom carrying a kit in her mouth. Willowpelt hissed, the Tom looked at her and ran off out of the emergency exit. Thankfully, without the kit.
Willowpaw went in and checked over the kit, there was only a small bit of blood on the kit's neck, from the tom's sharp teeth. She still decided she would bring the kit to the medicine cat, unfortunately the medicine cat was Misty.

WillowPaw took the kit from the ground and carried it over to Misty’s den, and put it on the ground. Willowpaw started hissing and clawing the ground. Misty looked back and Willowpaw ran into the den and pretended to sleep. Misty ran over and sniffed the air, all he could smell was the kit. And CloudClan scent. He looked down at the kit and picked it up in his jaws and brought it into his den. WillowPaw peered out of the den and sighed in relief. The kit wasn’t on the ground. She went back into her den and closed her eyes.

^also before, it said Willowpelt. That was when I didn’t know the star,paw, Kit, Rule. So… just I meant willowpaw 😅 next fanfic ion goose feathers curse.

Chapter four

I woke up in a place that was strange and quiet. •Medicine den• Two she-cats bustled around, caring for the other cats there. “She’s awake CinderPelt.” The small brown she-cat meowed. The gray one, CinderPelt, looked over, “Oh! Go get FireStar, LeafPaw.” CinderPelt meowed back. LeafPaw hurried out to get FireStar. “Wha-WHERE ARE MY KITS?!” Panic swept over me. “Sh, it’s okay, they have been in the nursery.”

🌅Duskfall🌅
Dusk tackled her best friend, Doe. The former housecat squirmed away and batted at her with her front paws. Her beautiful fawn-and-white pelt shone in the sunlight, and her eyes, the amber of glistening sap and warm sunrays, glimmered playfully as they met her own. Her own eyes resembled an ocean of sapphires, and her fur was black with lots of small white speckles. Doe affectionately called her Starry sometimes, and she could see why.
“I still haven’t told you the best news of my life, Starry.” Doe rolled over onto her back and idly swatted a butterfly.
“Oh? And what is that?” Dusk said in a teasing tone.
“Dusk, you know the tom I told you about? Sunfrost? I’m leaving Twolegplace to join him in his Clan. And I’m expecting his kits!”
“Oh, wow! That’s wonderful!”
Underneath the complements, a tiny seed of resentment grew in her soul. Twolegplace. Another Clan word. She’d loved toms before, but they’d all been in the city. And Doe was leaving her! Leaving her, her lifelong friend, for the love of a tom and the stuck-up Clans of wild cats who thought they were oh-so-better than the city cats, with their wars and “noble code” that got broken every five seconds anyway. Oh, well. She’d be here for her whole life, probably, until she died.
And so it was. Doe left her. She nurtured that seed of resentment, let it sprout branches to wind around her heart. Her life was just like that of every other city cat- territorial, always changing, on the run, fighting constantly. Dusk met a tom, and bore his two kits. She died of sickness at a good age for a city cat, but as she passed away she thought of Doe, her old friend, and the anger and sadness swallowed her up. She left her pelt and drifted up to the skies. Her fur, always pretty, had become smooth, silky, and shimmering, and her eyes had somehow deepened and brightened in color at the same time, becoming infinitely more vivid.
“Shadowy Betrayal,” a voice whispered in her ear. She wondered what she had done to deserve that description, that name, and then she realized- she hadn’t done anything. It was Doe, who had betrayed her, who had given her her name.
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Many moons later, drifting in mysterious forests and looking down on the world below, she came upon a cat. A cat who looked exactly like Doe. Doe herself, young as she had ever been and glimmering with starlight, stood by that cat. Doe’s daughter was convulsing on the ground, a stick between her teeth. A healer of some sort stood nearby, and a tom who was probably Doe’s daughter’s mate. The kits were born, three, and Shadowy Betrayal did something she hadn’t done in moons. She traveled down to the surface. One kit had a fawn-and-white pelt, and she reached out to it. It looked so much like her old friend. She gasped as her paw entered the kit but didn’t go through- it was sucked in. She followed her paw and spun down. She could see other spirits doing the same, one small white kit for the tom and a huge brown tom for the other she-cat. And at once, she could see that kit’s future. She was to fall in love, have kits, laugh, cry. And she could see that she, Dusk, Shadowy Betrayal, was supposed to be the antagonist in Doe’s grandkit’s life. Well, that may be. But what if the only difference between good or bad is who’s telling the story?
Part 2 in Graystripe’s Vow! Chapter list in Moth Flight’s Vision!
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Okay to be true I haven’t read it…. But I’d like to say something to quoop, get out of here. Since I like leafpool so much I’m making an oc for her!!!!!

Name:leafclaw kind smart stubborn and fierce brown she cat.

Aunts:leafpool and squirrelflight

Parents:unknown

Siblings:unknown

Mate:none

Kits:none

Position:exiled…..

Sincerely,
Hazel star of kind clan see description in into the wild bye!!! ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

How dare u call this book trash!!! I love leafpool and she is my second favorite other then squirrelflight, yellowfang, cinderpelt, and firestar and I am sooooooo sad the she dies in the future and it breaks my heart to see that she didn’t want to stay alive but at least she is doing fine but when it reaches to the part and when ashfur takes over everything I’m glad her spirit lives later in the books and I hope the same kindness of starclan when squirrelflight dies.

Ps: plz don’t judge me for anything I said. 🙂 also five stars for the book.

Some people are putting UNNECESSARY HATE ON LEAFPOOL!!!!!!!!

I’m kinda disappointed that Leafpool didn’t die. She’s like my second least favorite character. (The first being Yellowfang and the third being Onestar)

I have nothing to say. You can’t blame her She did what was best.

LEAFPOOL WITH NEVER DIEEEEEE! HOW DARE U SAY THAT! SEND THEM TO THE RANCH! *Hammer bang* “JaIL!” Said judge AshFur.” THEREFORE YOU HAVE EATEN TO MANY JAY BURGERS AND WENT AGIANST LEAFPOOLS BOOTFUIL RIGHTS AND U WILL NOW DIE” Screeched AshFur.
-GhøstNight and my apprentice, FlickeringPaw