Warriors: Cloudstar's Journey

To continue my title, I hate those leaders because they so selfishly chased SkyClan away. & Cloudstar had to leave his mate & kits!! WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE?!?!?! I’m so angry that I think I should finish this review right now

Silverflame signing out

So flippin’ 😤😡😤😡😤😡😤😡😤 at the other leaders, the badger-hearts!!

Also the person who titled their review “ 4 kits!?! “
It’s not weird that Hazelwing had four kits. Frostfur (I’m pretty sure) had a litter of four right after Firestar joined ThunderClan so that’s not weird. Just wanted to point that out.

Silver the sky wing: Cloudstar is a whole different cat. Cloudstar was alive many years before even Cloudpaw’s mother was born.
Also I think her warrior name should be Cracklestorm! Or maybe Crackleclaw. Whichever you like better

I’m confused cus I thought Cloudpaw doesn’t become Cloudstar so is Firehearts nephew Cloudpaw Cloudstar?!? I’m only on book 5 after all…

- Cracklepaw of thunderclan (She needs a warrior name please suggest some for me ty!)

Twilight
Sex: female
Status: loner
Appearance : Black cat with 1/2 of her face white
Mother: crescentmoon
Father :star
Sister :starlight
Brother:greenhorse
Description : her mother was a clean cat when she learned this she decided to join thunderclan and her sister so I stayed rogue/loaner. She becomes clan Deputy, and will be twilightstar and gain respect of all the clans.

၊ really liked this book :ρ
၊ havent read all of it yet tho. is skykit(skywatcher) alive yet? he was very old

>:>

For MidnightClan!

Name: WanderSoul
Sex: she-cat
Pelt: fluffy, black pelt with a white chest and piercing aqua eyes
Parents: Unknown; dark black tom with aqua eyes. Zara; dark gray she-cat with gray eyes
Siblings: Snarl; large black tom
Mate: none
Kits: none
Traits: very convincing, rude, beautiful, attractive, loving to her kin/clan, eViL(obviously)
Backstory:
WanderSoul was once a good cat, but one day, everything changed. Something in her snapped. She was turning into her father. She wasn’t carefree and happy. No. She was gone. Her energetic spirit was gone. Never to return.

Hope you except her! Btw, she’s good at hiding her emotions and real self. Byeeee😆

Prologue
The warm breeze drifted in the air, carrying the scent of new leaf. The sun shone down warmly, dappling the grass under the oak tree, while the pretty blue sky shone with it as clouds dotted across its depths. A stream trickled nearby, flowing noiselessly past the two cats, who padded back and forth along the riverbank. “ How are we going to get FlickeringPaw back? “ The first one meowed, a pretty silver she - cat with one light blue dazzling eye and the other light emerald green. The next one stopped abruptly and sat on the warm grass. “ I don’t know. It’s my fault, isn’t it? “ The second one replied, a black fluffy Tom with white eyes . The she-cats ears went back and she stopped pacing . “ Don’t say that. It’s not your fault . “ She meowed, pausing to give her chest fur a lick. “ DuskMoon, you stupid furball. It’s Willows fault. You know this. “ DuskMoon let his head hang. “I know, but, I was the one who send the prophecy to Willow.” He meowed, ashamed of himself. The she-cat gave him a look, then meowed, “ You didn’t know Willow was going to do such a thing. It’s not your fault. “ DuskMoon still looked ashamed of himself. “ But what if it is my fault? “ he meowed sadly. “ What if….I did put FlickeringPaw in such danger? Oh, Silverclaw, what have I done? “ Silverclaw rested her tail on his shoulder. “ We will find out a way. If a group of warriors know how to save the three worlds, then we can figure out how to save one cats life. “ DuskMoon gazed up at Silverclaw affectionly. “ You always were courages. “ Silverclaw licked her chest fur, embarrassed. “ What happened to the sad stupid furball just now? “ She asked, giving him a cuff around the ear playfully. DuskMoon rolled his eyes and cuffed her ear back. “ Hey, you stupid furball! “ Silverclaw yelped, surprised. DuskMoon purred in amusement and swiped her muzzle, claws sheathed, and began to dart away. Silverclaw ran after him and yowled in joy. “ Come back here, Mangepelt! “ She purred playfully. DuskMoon began to yell back, but before he could, the ground began to rumble. Silverclaw and DuskMoon staggered, the stars in their fur bouncing around. They heard a sickening cracking sound and one of the giant oak trees branches they were under fell , just barely hitting DuskMoon. The sky darkened into red, and the grass withered to black. DuskMoon yelped in panic, and the grass began to grow longer. Then, suddenly, the ground split open and they fell, down, into a deep engulfing blackness, like being plunged into water and being pulled deeper into its endless, black depths.
Thanks for reading! Chapter one is in LeopardStars super edition! ( it will come out soon )

But I’ve heard good things about it. I really want to read it in the future. It seems super good and interesting.
-Blossomrose of ShadowClan

YOU SELFISH CREATURES, DRIVING SKYCLAN OUT

-Brokensong

Okay, let me quote something: ‘Hazelwing rushed her kits past, the four of them wide eyed at the sight of the unmoving cat’. And now let me point out a error; FOUR. In the stories, the max is THREE kits a litter! But she had... well...FOUR kits! As my sister Lisa would say ‘UTTERLY UNACCEPTABLE! THATS AGAINST THE RULES!’